It seemed cluttered. There was definitely a lot going on and I felt like there wasn't a steady pace. There were a few things that I could not stand behind, no matter how steamy a scene could be. Honestly, I could not finish it. It didn't keep my interest within the first 50 pages. I could not relate to the heroine, nor could I relate to any of the situations in the storyline. I tried to continue on to see how it progresses, but once I hit a certain scenario, I had to stop.